Reading a short story I wrote when I was 9
Added 2022-06-13 03:50:01 +0000 UTCEvery few years I stumble upon this old story I wrote and each time it's even worse than I remember it, anyways lemme know if I should publish it
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Floating squirrelsโฆ? so much more believable than flying monkeys โฆ!๐x
Chris d em
2022-12-30 18:47:01 +0000 UTCso articulate
Afterglow ASMR
2022-06-22 03:35:47 +0000 UTCbest part
Afterglow ASMR
2022-06-22 03:35:34 +0000 UTCAnd then before it was a and they and ran and stuff just happend โ ๏ธ
BagelTanker
2022-06-21 11:23:02 +0000 UTCSo many plot twists! 9 year old Glow was on her way to being the next M. Night.
Aaron
2022-06-13 17:30:27 +0000 UTCAdorable lol loved it โค and I'm happy to be back (^-^) but seriously, Rapunzel/singing/rp when? ๐๐
Kiko Raterta
2022-06-13 14:07:27 +0000 UTCWhat about an audio role play adaptation?? That would beโฆ quite something! But somebody needs to edit the brothers grim wiki to give glow all the credit!
QadenJames
2022-06-13 08:38:33 +0000 UTCWell like you wrote back then: it needs a little work. BUT I totally think mixing up different fairytales is a fun approach and if you get what you have into a plot line, I believe it could be a fun read ๐ So yeah definitely publish it ๐
Simon R.
2022-06-13 08:21:17 +0000 UTCHey, it's definitely better than anything I wrote at age 10. Heck, it's probably better than most of the stuff I could write today, as far as story goes lmao
AMarshmallowPie
2022-06-13 04:03:20 +0000 UTC
