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5.12 - The Wire (Rewatch) [T1]

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Yes! How did that get in? Thanks!

Ted Steel

Edit suggestion: J: There's only so much of this kind of football fans can take. I can only imagine how angry Max Best is going to be in his pre-match team talk. Oh, what's this? I'm getting a call. --> in his half-time team talk

AN

RetiredRed with the Wire reference - Emmaโ€™s alias confirmed

Andres919

Fixed, thanks! I think 'palate' is new to me. I must have seen it spelled like that a few times but it never clicked.

Ted Steel

Thank you!

Ted Steel

Yeah, I was confused at first, as well. Had to read it a couple times and I'm still only like 85% sure that it's the part where it says, ". . . then clipping a ball around the defence for Lewis to run onto." Soon after, Pascal narrates that Max had been "waiting for the perfect moment to surprise the home team." And I figure that the main point of a huge surprise that wasn't a sweeping tactical change would be to score a singular goal. So yeah, long story short, I think it was Lewis off an assist from Max (though it could definitely stand to be a bit clearer in-story).

OriksGaming

Everyone already has it.

Richard Carling

It's not clear to me who scored the third goal

Rob

Oh, that one felt good.

BelligerentGnu

Always a delightful chapter when Henri cameos

Rob

All that talk last week had me ready to find the files on my PC. Ted beat me to the rewatch!

Caerold

SlowVPN lolโ€ฆthe worst VPN name ever, nobody is buying that

Andres919

Can we?

Matthew The Bread Smith

I dont comment often but i absolutely love this series, glorious work.

James

I think this was another case of the captain's mood affecting the entire team, so I wonder who Peter was expecting? Thanks for the chapter, and have a great weekend. Edit Suggestions: primitive palettes of the rest of the world. -- palettes -> palates as worried about the next seven days as Chis Frey. -- Chis -> Chris we couldnโ€™t find a fourth goal. -- I don't think the third goal is fully clear (I'm assuming it was the pass to Lewis Lamarre, but it's not very apparent).

Tareq Malikyar

WE ARE GOING UP! I SAID WE ARE GOING UP!

Geoff Urland


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